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    Throttle Junkie Journalist Entry

    Sorry for it being so late! I can't post it on your site so here

    everyone else, please tell me how it reads.

    I THINK THEY ALL WORK I WAS JUST THINKING BADLY.

    MAKE SURE YOU OPEN THIS UNDER WORD Document and not notepad!
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    Hey Kyle, it looks like you really had a great time at Mudbug. I made a few recommendations that I highlighted in yellow. I did technical writing and instruction for more than 30 years in the communications/cellular/wireless field. During that time I found that I could read what I wrote many times and only see what my brain thought I wrote, not what I really wrote. And I also found out that people in different parts of our country talk and write differently than people from other parts of the country. For instance, I remember a guy from down south somewhere telling me about the "whale" in his backyard. I finally figured out that he meant "well." So, just consider my suggestions and make any changes as you see fit. Take care... Ron
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    Quote Originally Posted by King_Of_Fun View Post
    Hey Kyle, it looks like you really had a great time at Mudbug. I made a few recommendations that I highlighted in yellow. I did technical writing and instruction for more than 30 years in the communications/cellular/wireless field. During that time I found that I could read what I wrote many times and only see what my brain thought I wrote, not what I really wrote. And I also found out that people in different parts of our country talk and write differently than people from other parts of the country. For instance, I remember a guy from down south somewhere telling me about the "whale" in his backyard. I finally figured out that he meant "well." So, just consider my suggestions and make any changes as you see fit. Take care... Ron
    sweet thanks a ton for that. I noticed that my biggest problem is re-reading what I write. Those mistakes could and should have been fixed. Thank you for pointing out the mistakes and correcting them.

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    Hey, no problem - glad to help. Herry Christmas to you and your family... Ron

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